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gotnotime 16-03-2013 10:30 PM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
Looking at both of them smile creeped him out, it felt as though he's going to get raped by these two high sex drive ah lians. Not that he'd mind any other day.

Instead, what they did next put him at a loss for words.
Ariel and cheryl started kissing each other tenderly on the lips, with their hands roaming all over from their massive chest to their lovehole, and back again. Little willie, was leaking like a tap as he stood hard at attention.

C: Aww look who's getting all aroused now huh?
A: You wanna let him join us?
C: Hmm.. Not for now I guess?

"Not for now huh.. Means later hor?" Willie thought to himself, as he continued watching this lesbian scene unfolding live before him.

Ariel and cheryl continued to carass each other, and lay on the bed, french kissing and rubbing each other. It was getting really, really unbearable for Willie, he started to wank as he watched the ladies engage in their own pleasure.

A: Uhm hmm.. Look who's getting all horny and jerky now :P
W: You both ah.. Deserve another favour from me.
A: What favour?

Willie lunged from his chair, pushing Ariel down onto the bed and leaned closely towards her.

W: What do you think, Ariel?

He kissed her, and ariel got more aggressive, grabbing his head and frenching him, while cheryl grabbed little willie from behind, running her hands up and down his entire length gently.
Slowly but sensually, willie kissed her ears, blowing hot air into them, and moved down, kissing her luscious lips before moving down to those twin C peaks of hers.

Her sensitive nipples quickly became erected to his touch, and cheryl couldn't help but moan in pleasure. Not forgetting cheryl, he ran his other hand along her body, tracing the outline of those D peaks, and twirling her nips in a circle, before moving south to finger her lovehole, which was dripping with love juice.
Moving south on ariel's side, there was a faint fragrance as he started licking her, from just above her clit, down the centre of her lips, and side to side, much like licking an ice cream cone. Ariel could only moan in ecstasy, as she turned her head from side to side, enjoying this pleasure for the first time.

Willie tried to insert his tongue into her, but ariel was too tight for that, and he did not think that she was a virgin until she told him to take it slow.

W: Aww you.. Please climb on top of me.

Willie swapped positions with ariel, with cheryl now rubbing and fingering herself, while ariel positioned herself above little willie.

W: Wait! Aren't we forgetting rubber?
A: Yolo! (You Only Live Once)

Before willie could react, she lowered herself onto little willie, grimacing as she adjusted to having something in her for the first time. That was the moment ariel had been waiting for, after cheryl told her how pleasurable it would be.

gotnotime 16-03-2013 11:01 PM

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Willie groaned as ariel lowered herself onto him, she was very warm and wet, and he felt every ridge on her walls as he stretched her lovehole for the first time. They remained in that position for a good minute before he noticed ariel started tearing.

A: Cheryl! What am I doing la.. I'm supposed to give michael my first time, but broke up with him and now I'm giving it to our school senior!
W: Hey! I ain't no replacement for your boyfriend okay?

Willie felt pissed, as he felt that he was being made use of to make michael, whoever that jerk is, jealous. He pulled ariel down, hugging her tightly as he began pumping her. Ariel couldn't stop willie as he hugged her tight, and she might as well learnt to enjoy the pleasure emnating from her very tight snatch.

W: You fucking ah lian har, think I'm your boyfriend right? Sorry but I wanna fuck you so hard!
C: Siao liao!

Cheryl got even more horny seeing Willie savaging her friend, and came a second time, as ariel closed her eyes and moaned very loudly.

Suddenly, ariel started spasing as she reached her first climax, and squirted onto little willie, with her lovejuice squirting out everytime little willie withdrew from her. It was an erotic sight to behold, and willie felt like he was reaching the point of no return as he continued pumping her hard and fast for the past 15 minutes.

W: Where you want me to cum? I'm cumming sooonnn!
A: I wanna taste you!

Willie didn't need another word as he withdrew from her, and ariel got up to suck him for the first time. He came instantly, pumping copious loads of his seeds inside her mouth, as ariel twirled her tongue and sucked every drop out of him, enjoying the taste of semen for the first time. Cheryl smiled, as she watched them both enjoy each other. It seemed to her that her job as a good friend was done, helping her get over that jerk of a michael.

A: Hmm.. It tastes sweet, next time I want can call you?
W: Wtf? But your boyfriend..
A: I broke up with that jerk, he cheated on me and even met me with that slut. If not you also won't be so lucky today hor.
W: Oh.. Ehh tell you what, why not we go meet him?
A: Mai siao la...
W: To tell him how unlucky he is to have lost you, and I had your first time.
A: Sounds good!

Soon, they washed up and left the hotel, with Willie sending cheryl home first.

Meanwhile, on his mind, he hatched another plan as he drove around..

gotnotime 16-03-2013 11:18 PM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
The last chapter will be out in the morning. :)

gotnotime 16-03-2013 11:19 PM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
Willie purposely sent cheryl back first, even though it was not on the way.
He started hatching a plan to meet michael, and ariel agreed to it, as she wanted to antagonize michael for cheating on her. However, it was to take place a month later, as willie did not want ariel to be labeled a slut for getting a replacement so soon after breakup.

In the meantime, both of them went out on several dates, as their respective schools were near each other. Not to mention, they also experimented a lot, enjoying their lustful pleasures in places like handicapped toilets, empty tutorial rooms in his poly, in his car, and the list goes on, with rubber of course.

Throughout that one month, Ariel was starting to really have feelings for Willie, as she felt that he was a gentleman, always attending to her needs. On the other hand, she was hesitant as he knows that he was being made use of to antagonise her ex.

On the other hand, Willie was also starting to fall for Ariel. Despite that vulgar and ah lian facade, beneath that lay a demure woman, who was understanding and always there for him. He too, was hesitant as he knew his role was to irritate her ex, and make him regret for cheating on her.

acidicavex 17-03-2013 01:35 AM

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Nice writing bro local favor well done!!

SpitZur 17-03-2013 04:39 AM

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Camping here to support TS

gotnotime 17-03-2013 07:20 AM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
Author's notes: Thanks everyone for the support thus far :)

As the date approached, both willie and ariel were getting uneasy.
Willie hasn't met michael before, although he was physically lean and toned, he felt uneasy meeting ariel's ex, what if michael was a gym freak and more buff than him?
On ariel's side, she was worried that willie might leave her after this is over.

Friday finally came, and willie drove his mitsubishi evolution to school for the first time, much to the surprise of his schoolmates. After all, he was a humble guy who never flaunted his wealth, and was relatively quiet in school.
Meeting ariel for lunch in his poly, he couldn't help but look at ariel clad in her jc uniform, it was a sight to behold. Little willie was getting pumped up.

A: Ehh... You okay? Keep looking at me like that I will shy one leh.
W: What shy... You were never shy lor, especially on bed right? :P
A: Naughty you! Ehh bring me to one of your school toilets, I wanna change to home clothes.
W: Hmm... Follow me.

They went to the handicapped toilet at the fourth floor, where it was vacant and nobody knew about the toilet as it was in a corner of the building. Watching Ariel do a striptease as she took off her uniform was exciting. Slowly, she walked towards him, unbuttoning her top and threw it to willie, as she grinded him like clubbing without music. Willie kept her uniform in his bag, and pulled down her skirt, running his hands around her body, feeling every inch of her fair and delicate skin, deliberately missing her spots.

A: What say... We have a quick one before meeting that asshole later?
W: Shh... Ladies should be demure, or are you in the mood for being rough again?
A: I just want you inside me.

Guiding ariel to the sink, she leaned forward and used the sink for support, while willie entered her from behind slowly. Ariel's lovehole gripped little willie with a vice grip, and ariel moaned, only to have willie cover her mouth.

W: We're in school, my dear..

Ariel nodded in agreement, as willie continued humping her in that standing doggy position, hard and fast, the way she likes it. Soon, ariel couldn't take the pounding anymore and came, squirting her translucent juices onto willie, and pushed him to sit on the toilet bowl.

A: It's about time that you sit back and relax too...

She started slowly by grinding him, leaning forward for him to grope and suck on her C cuppers. Not satisfied with that, she pushed his head up and french kissed him aggressively with a tongue fight, moaning into his mouth whenever she hit the right spot. Ariel soon changed to riding him, feeling little willie's entire length in her as she came a second time, her love juice leaking every time she impaled herself on him.

W: Where you want me to cum on?
A: inside me!
W: Siao ah!
A: I'm on the pills la, cb!
W: Knn ask you to be more demure liao right...
A: You started using hokkien first! :P
W: Lai liao lai liao! Ugh!

Willie came hard and fast, releasing a huge load into her like their first time, except that it wasn't her mouth this time. Ariel felt high as she felt the warm liquid fill her up deep inside. Thankfully, ariel always had a pad with her just in case, and she wore it to prevent cum from leaking out of her as they dressed up..

gotnotime 17-03-2013 07:42 AM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
Author's notes: This is the last chapter, as my camp duty is ending soon ^^
I'll be back with updates to 'Fucking rival' soon.

Driving his car down south to orchard area, the question suddenly popped up in his mind again. What if Ariel decided to call it quits after this has blown over?
Running his left hand along her thigh, he decided to ask in an indirect way.

W: I got something to tell you, and it's really important, dear.
A: You stroke me until like this.. Don't tell me you want another round after meeting him?
W: Wa you're the only one who can make me sound gay, but I want you not in that sexual way la..
A: Not sex then what way?
W: I don't wanna just fuck you and move through motion la. I wanna be not just a stand-in boyfriend, but to really love you and make love to you, can?
A: You say until so deep... But I've been waiting for you to say it la.
W: So.. Will you be my girlfriend?
A: Then what have you been treating me as in this one month huh?
W: Hmm... What do you think?
A: Naughty you, I soo wanna punish you later, willie. You and your little willie
W: Little willie is always ready for you!
A: Naughty you!

Soon, they reached cineleisure, and michael parked his impreza hatchback in the open carpark.

M: Seems like you got hitched with my old toy huh? What's your name man?
W: The name's Willie, and you're driving my old toy, michael.
M: Oh issit? I'd wanna race with you if you dare, coward willie.
W: First to reach NYP wins?
M: Cool with that.

Willie revved his massive tricked out twin turbo engine and sped off, with michael following close behind on the expressway. Michael caught up beside him and jeered.

W: Just a bit more power.. Gotta wait till the other turbine spools. Hey ariel, I'll turn off the air con, need the full power of my engine la.
A: Just win him can already!

Without a word, ariel helped to turn off the aircon, and there was a noticeable amount of boost kicking in, as the distance between willie and michael got further and further. By the time willie reached, he even had enough time to reverse park, and wait for michael's arrival.

W: Hmm.. I guess actions speak louder than words? That's why I gave up my old toy car. Michael, am I right?
M: You.. I'll race you another day!

With that, michael sped off to the main road. Unfortunately for him, he did not look out for traffic, as a lorry slammed right into him, crushing his car and killing him instantly.

W: Seems like there won't be another day.

Willie drove slowly to another exit after calling for the ambulance, and sent Ariel home for another round of fun.

alan0338 17-03-2013 09:52 AM

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camp here... :D

waahaa 17-03-2013 10:19 AM

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dramatic man....

Cherrygen 17-03-2013 10:22 AM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
di, welcome back "wle"! :p
hmm, the story i read recently all ended up with somebody dying :confused:

gotnotime 17-03-2013 10:57 AM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
Just wondering though, how was the story?
It's my first time writing a story with ah lians inside..
I think ah bengs and ah lians stories pretty much have a local flavour aye..

Sidra183 17-03-2013 11:39 AM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
Hey ts, nice story with a fresh change from the usual story plots. But the ending a bit abrupt. Haha. Nevertheless, good story!

BMW69 17-03-2013 02:11 PM

Re: Ah lian to lover.
 
LOL I found the ending hilarious xD

gotnotime 17-03-2013 02:55 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by BMW69 (Post 8678295)
LOL I found the ending hilarious xD

Glad you got the sublimal joke! ^^

On the other hand, I feel like writing another one of these "blitz" stories, where it happens fast, and ends fast lol :D


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