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fnulnu88 17-10-2012 01:07 AM

Re: Smoke buddy > Beer buddy > FB ?
 
Where did TS go? Continue lah :p

sp150 17-10-2012 03:14 AM

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Ts everyone have they own style of writing so no worries abt how u write most important is don't let it die halfway cos a full thread is hard to come by. And We all know how hard it is to actually write our own encounter/story(though I didn't post any of mine but thinking of how to start is already damn hard)so don't let comments bring u down just take it as constructive criticism. Cheers!
Camping here. :)

want0nmee 17-10-2012 09:26 AM

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TS, we need more updates from you. more.

zenmeyang 17-10-2012 12:01 PM

Re: Smoke buddy > Beer buddy > FB ?
 
miss my smoking days ... quited for 2 years plus liao, after nearly smoking for 20 yrs !

verytired 17-10-2012 09:51 PM

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Thanks guys for the encouragement especially to bros who up me.

@sp150. Am fine with criticism. But lack of comments leh. Would be good if more interactive like bro zen here. U should start yours. If worry bout half way die off then no one would start to roll the ball.

@zen. Good for u! I'm trying to quit too. Now down to 5 sticks per day. So a pack will last me 4 days.

1 thing I regret is that should write my whole story in mswords first then cut & paste whole thing 1 go. Now I must struggle to not be overwhelm by pressure of letting u guys down for waiting too long. This touch screen keyboard is making it tougher.

Will cont when I'm done with work & the missus sleeps.

Thanks again for waiting.

FatSpider 17-10-2012 10:12 PM

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keep the story going, very nice so far

verytired 18-10-2012 01:21 AM

Mis-matched bra & panties
 
Cont...
I can't believe these words came out of my mouth....

Me: "yeah. I different. I want you without your skirt."

This time i saw it coming & managed to siam the slap. Couldn't believe i said something so corny. My words is exactly what I was thinking then. But Jermaine thinks I was joking and pulling her legs. In fact she finds it hilarious and laughed.

Me: "am I so harmless to you?"

Jermaine & I were comfortable with each other. She grab every opportunity to gloat me and wouldn't let me off without joking criticism at my slightest blunder. I in return criticize her wearing of loose fitting shirts that made her flat chest even flatter & her mis-matched bra & panties colors. (this one slap the hardest...). Speaking of that....That was a day when i approached her desk just as she was rotating on her chair to reach the cabinets behind. You guys can imagine yourselves trying to turn on an office chair u'd move one leg to drag your body with the chair to gain momentum? Yeah. U guess it, i saw a glimpse of her lacy white panties. She saw me coming so I quickly ripped my eyes off what I'd be rather staring that moment and smile back. Damn, recalling it now is still erotic, dun know why since I had later on progressed further at this.

Later on downstairs, I stood beside her in a serious tone: "you cannot be angry with me for telling u this....can u turn anti-clockwise instead to reach behind you?"

Jermaine was halfway lighting her cigarette when she paused and stared in bewilderment: "shit! U saw!"

Frankly, I was quite taken then that she figured in out in that 2 secs. That means she saw me, maybe in a split seconds, staring down just before our eyes locked. Yet was too fast she couldn't be sure. Thinking back, was glad I told her then.

Me: "Cho-to cho-to cho-to. U promised wouldn't be angry leh!"

Jer: "i'm not. Shit man!......tell me what u see."

Me: "wahlau, u every morning every evening also see yet u ask me what I see?! Dun believe nevermind"

Jer: "Really can see har? Shit man."

Me: "that's why I quickly walked away. I'm telling u so u would be careful in future." (but in fact I wished I had my phone camera ready.)

She kept quite, blushed and her doe eyes looked thankful. I tried to ease her awkwardness: "so u dun cause more ppl nose bleed."

She laughed and slapped my arm lightly. And so that's why I know her bra & panties were mis-matched

casa2011 18-10-2012 08:53 AM

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Originally Posted by verytired (Post 7934306)
thanks dude. For awhile i tot i got only 5 or so listeners. I needed more feedbacks to improvecheers!


You earned yourself one more supporter here! This local office romance buay pai sia. Try to include more "chat conversations" between both of you to make the story more juicy.

Camping~~~too bad I can't up ppl point yet :x


So, TS, are you still working in the same office as her now?

ludwig19 18-10-2012 11:37 AM

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Another silent supporter coming out to show support! Continue with ur gd work bro, its well appreciated by ur readers :)

verytired 19-10-2012 12:05 AM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by casa2011 (Post 7947659)
Try to include more "chat conversations" between both of you to make the story more juicy.
still working in the same office as her now?

Noted your suggestion.
Answering that question will be a spoiler. Do u still wanna know now?:p

Quote:

Originally Posted by ludwig19 (Post 7948258)
Another silent supporter coming out to show support!

thank you.
This few days I'm pretty tied up. Pls be patient.

hi2u 19-10-2012 12:27 AM

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ts take your time man haha. It's hard to wait, but good things are worth the wait.

casa2011 19-10-2012 12:35 AM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by verytired (Post 7951652)
Noted your suggestion.
Answering that question will be a spoiler. Do u still wanna know now?:p

thank you.
This few days I'm pretty tied up. Pls be patient.


I still prefer to wait.
:D

SkylineGTR 19-10-2012 09:41 PM

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nice story bro.. upz u +5!

Cheers

verytired 24-10-2012 01:31 AM

Getting from smoke to beer...
 
Thanks gtr for the encouragement. Fighting sleep, very tired brings another installment.

Cont...
her bra & panties were mis-matched...

We scheduled our break & lunch thru sms so that we dun seems so close as to stepped out together every time. At first it's "smoke?" "what to eat?" "my car or your car?". Then it slowly grown to gossip bout colleagues. In short, we would SMS during work hours about everything & nothing. Thou as an unspoken rule, we never SMS after office hours or weekends. Guess we both know, like I mentioned earlier, we were married but not to each other. We just managed to click well.

Then one day, as I was walking pass her desk for our regular break, I noticed she didn't smile. (I really dun understand what's on my face but she always smile so gleefully when she sees me the first time everyday like some long lost friends). With a sullen face, she followed me out. We were not alone in the lift, we just kept quiet all the way til we sat at the bench and lit our cigarette.

After a long while, i lit up another stick: "u wanna talk bout it"

Jermaine was silent. She took out a cigarette and I promptly lit up for her.

Me: "if u r ready. I'm ready"

Jer: "let's go out of cbd for lunch. U drive."

Well, under normal circumstances I'd say things like come back erp u pay. But that day is not normal. We went back to my desk after the smoke break and i kept thinking bout what could have happened.

Before long, it's 1pm. We had lunch somewhere off tanglin. i was caught off guard when she ordered a draught in the middle of a working day. But just to go along, i ordered the same telling myself just 1 should be fine. (i was driving, remember?). After a awkwardly quiet entrée, she passed me her phone. It's an sms exchange with her husband. I shall not go onto details here, but basically he's asking how much jermaine have, when is the next payday, any shares she's holding that can sell.

Me: "money problem?"

Jer: "more like gambling problem!"

Me: "the new casino? Apply NCPG loh"

Jer: "it's useless. He travels a lot for work, so he can still go overseas casinos."

Thru our conversation, i learnt that she's from quite a well-to-do family. So the main problem is not lack of money, it's her husband incorrigible habits.

Jer: "actually, I'd been drinking lately. After i tuck my daughter to bed I'd go to the park near by place to drink."

Me: "gosh. A gorgeous lady alone drinking in the park in the middle of the nite?! Safe or not?"

Jer: "1 or 2 cans wouldn't get me drunk. Besides there r quite a few ppl jogging."

Me: "Your husband not worried"

Jer: "he run his own accountant practise. Wake late work late. So I'm home before him. But than even he knows, he couldn't be bothered."

i dunno what to say then. She had 2 bottles of beer & not in a very moody state. I shouldn't be riding on others unhappiness. But as jermaine stared into the emptiness in deep thoughts, her frowning together with her perfectly shaped high arch brows made her look so sexy. And I shouldn't get started with her drinking from the bottle.....damn.

Me: "think u can go back to work? Why not u call in sick, go home & have a rest? I'll pick u up on my way to office tomorrow so u don't worry bout leaving your car in office."

She nodded. I settled the bill then drove her home. It's broad daylight, she wasn't drunk. So i just dropped her at her block, watched her entered the lift and went back to office myself. Alone in my car, can't help but wonder if I should send her all the way to her place. Maybe it's not convenient, but most importantly, she didn't ask. Or maybe she was waiting for me to offer. Argh...what the hell! Dun think dun think. It's not possible.

Max18 29-10-2012 02:42 PM

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Sniper reporting! Brother i guess u should have send her up, broad daylight no issue. Inside the room, close curtains n door, on the air con set liao.

Peace

Seiyajohn 29-10-2012 03:00 PM

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Nice story.

eeemen 31-10-2012 11:25 PM

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Interesting lay out for the story bro, a slow and nice build up, so don't worry, carry onz with ur style of writing la, enjoying it!! Cherrs bro, .................

verytired 01-11-2012 01:08 AM

Re: Smoke buddy > Beer buddy > FB ?
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Max18 (Post 7999266)
Sniper reporting! Brother i guess u should have send her up,

cannot lah bro. U sniper nor recki one issit? I dunno who else up there at that time leh
Quote:

Originally Posted by Seiyajohn (Post 7999328)
Nice story.

thanks
Quote:

Originally Posted by eeemen (Post 8011043)
Interesting lay out for the story bro, a slow and nice build up, so don't worry, carry onz with ur style of writing la

thanks. I tot I was too long winded & most bros expecting some actions the 1st page.

drinkmorewater 01-11-2012 01:24 AM

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Setting up smoke camp

verytired 01-11-2012 03:57 AM

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I'm on overseas assignment. Just came back to hotel half drunk. Just a short installment. No cliffhanger, sorry bros.

Cont...
Argh...what the hell! Dun think dun think. It's not possible...

Back in office, I sms her "everything ok?"

Jer: "not ok also must live on. At least for my daughter."

Me: "small issue lah. At least he's not seeing other woman."

Jer: "unless some other woman got so much money to dump on him."

Me: "hahah. On a bright side, at least he didn't hit u."

Half hour later.... Me: "or did he?"

Another half hour later. Jer: "pls keep my personal life a secret."

What bothered me then is the fact that my million dollar question still unanswered. Somehow, I already know the answer....

I tried to divert the topic with a bit of humour: "what? Did you say anything to me?"

Jer: "haha. I'm glad I know u. Take care see u tomorrow"

Me: "me too. Take care & have a nice rest. Dun stay out too late. be a good girl and drinks on me next time."

From then on, jermaine is more opened to me bout her personal life. Time & again she'd remind me to keep her problem a secret. She spoken to no one as she confessed she wanna keep a happy family image to her team colleagues and even her boss. I couldn't remember how long she said she's been married, but it was 10years ago when she meet her husband. She describe him as very 'kuw lan' & 'te ki'. Thought he would changed after becoming a dad but still the same. Sometimes she would show me her sms quarrel with her husband. When we can afford longer lunchtime, we went from fine diners to kopi tiam for beer or wine. Thru all her bitching, I sincerely felt for her. There wasn't any real solution. She wasn't really looking for one from me. I just offered her my ears...

see see only 01-11-2012 09:45 AM

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TS ....

A nice writing style ... :)

U got yourself another camper ... hope you have enough tents and beers .. :rolleyes: :D

lostbird 01-11-2012 11:44 AM

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Hmm a shoulder to cry on;)

honya 01-11-2012 08:33 PM

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You have good writing style man! you can really go scriptwriting ^^

verytired 02-11-2012 01:31 PM

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Thank you for the compliments
Quote:

Originally Posted by see see only (Post 8012213)
TS ....A nice writing style ... :) U got yourself another camper ... hope you have enough tents and beers .. :rolleyes: :D

...from old bird (sure got enuff beers to go around) Woah, did u up me so many points? Didn't noticed I got over 40. Is so, thanks bro

Quote:

Originally Posted by lostbird (Post 8012696)
Hmm a shoulder to cry on;)

...middle aged bird

Quote:

Originally Posted by honya (Post 8015033)
You have good writing style man! you can really go scriptwriting ^^

...& young bird, 1st post to boot ;-)
Will continue when I settle back in sg, cheers & thanks esp those who up my rep.

ricky79 02-11-2012 02:31 PM

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Cant wait for the next posting... keep it coming.

itiswhatitis 02-11-2012 04:36 PM

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mr verytired,

pls continue writing.... i like yr story....

i purposely went to suntec city today lunch time to see can spot both of u anot, hahah....

Sevenstorm 02-11-2012 06:27 PM

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sio hoon kee buddy falling in!!

Sevenstorm 02-11-2012 06:29 PM

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sio hoon kee buddy falling in !!!

sp150 02-11-2012 10:33 PM

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Bro verytired ur story not long winded lah got structure mah like ur heading smoke buddy>beer buddy > fb so now waiting anxiously for the fb part haha...just joking lah pls do continues ur style of writing.

verytired 02-11-2012 11:45 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by itiswhatitis (Post 8019080)
i purposely went to suntec city today lunch time to see can spot both of u anot, hahah....

did I told u I'm at suntec? Ah! Stalker!
Quote:

Originally Posted by sp150 (Post 8020555)
so now waiting anxiously for the fb part haha...just joking lah pls do continues ur style of writing.

thanks. Slowly lah. We got flesh got bloody. Got feelings one. Cannot say F then F, right?

And thanks to all who up my rep, anonymous or otherwise.

Btw, confession...I see 4 stars at my thread, wondering what that is, I clicked with this silly phone and suddenly became 5 stars. Bo pan kay hor. Sorry sorry.


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