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Old 17-03-2017, 12:54 PM
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Re: My ExWife, her sis and her mum

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Originally Posted by randyrockhard View Post
Just a piece of advice, for a better reading flow, please try to use line breaks after several sentences.

This would not only ease the reader's eyes, it would also help with the reader's mental breathing space.

And for better reading, please try to avoid using acronyms in place of names, as the shortening highly disrupts the flow.

Please do continue your story.
Fuck! Since you so clever why dun you write one.