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Old 26-05-2008, 02:00 AM
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Re: Upz my colleague's virgin daugther

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Originally Posted by faithevans View Post
i prefer the story build up though...

upped you for good effort.
thank you thank you. certainly appreciate the encouragement.

to other readers: if you have zapped me, or are going to zap me, it's fine with me. but i would definitely appreciate if you leave some constructive feedback as well instead of just lousy and fucked up. if it's that easy to do a good job i will be writing stories for a living in the comfort of my home instead of running around the place at work.