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#91
16-08-2006, 02:47 PM
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Bro onion-rings, you'll get the ball rolling and very soon, I believe others will follow suit...I'll try to chip in whenever possible...I have thought of the ending and will try my best to make it happen  In a way, its also a challenge for me...C'mon, 3 cheers for bro onion-ring...Hip hip hoorray !!! 
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#92
16-08-2006, 02:50 PM
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Wait....
for the first time (I think), no one question whether this is a true life incident or a fictional story!!! Well, your title reads "True Files" but at the same time you keep using the word "story". It doesn't bother me one bit so long as it is a grrrrreat read! Just wanted to point out another of your achievements, i.e. people read/engrossed until don't care/ don't mind/ forget.
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#93
16-08-2006, 02:53 PM
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Will try to do some research next time if ever come across another storyline that might interest other bros here...Cheers to all 
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#94
16-08-2006, 02:56 PM
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#95
16-08-2006, 03:02 PM
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My apologies for you being zapped...Really so sorry about it but glad that you managed to get back that valuable point... C'mon...the red carpet has been laid...invitations have been sent...all bros are awaiting for your first instalment
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#96
16-08-2006, 03:05 PM
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#97
16-08-2006, 04:02 PM
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Somewhere on the other side of Singapore, one man's eyebrows is twitching fast...Strange, he never had this feeling before...He thinks nothing of it and calls up Blackie...."Hello, ah orh hah??? Si wah lah...Can help me buy xxxx 3000 big and 5000 small or not???" "Money??? No problem lah...will pay you in a couple of days"....With that, he prays hard that his number will come in first place...Well, his prayers will soon be answered and his eyebrows continued to twitch very fast....
Then came the day of the draw and true enough the number came out though not in the top three. Kenny was overwhelm that you has stuck more than $500,000 and immediately gave ah orh a call to confirm his winning. "ah orh." "when can I collect my winning?" As ah orh is a big time bookie, he assured kenny. "Bian Kiar la, tommorrow I'll pass it to you." Kenny was so happy as this is his first time ever winning any money not to mention such a big sum. That night he couldn't sleep as he is too happy to and kept telling himself that now lady luck is shinning on him. But then again his left eye started to twitch even more which makes him worry as he knows it's not a good sign. But his mind is only worried thinking that ah orh had ran off with his winning, that's why his eye twitched. Without realising that it's already past 2am, he give ah orh a call. "eer.....ah orh, eeer......what time can I collect my money tomorrow." "You siow ah....Do you know what's the time now?" shouted angry ah orh. "Sorrie la...ah orh. I just thought..." "ok lah! tomorrow come to my place at 10 and I'll give you." interrupted ah orh and then hang up his mobile. There was a knock on his door at exactly 10 in the morning awakes ah orh who started swearing at his disturb sleep forgetting that he told kenny to meet him at that stipulated time. He openned the door and saw the bright looking kenny smiling. "wah...so early ah..." and let kenny in. Then ah orh went back into his room after telling kenny to sit without offering any drinks as he knows he's only interested to get his money and go off. About 15 minutes passed and ah orh exited from his room where he kept his money in a secret safe well hidden. His hands were holding a few big stacks of money which almost made kenny fell off the chair as he's never seen so much money before not to mention knowing all these are going to be his right at the very instance. He counted his money and put them in the bag which he's brought along and happily heads out of ah orh's door. At the very first step out of his door.....suddenly his left eye twitched very badly. He thought what the fu*k is the matter but couldn't care less anymore as the money is already in his bag. All he could think of is to crutched his bag fully slinged and tightly under his arm and speed up his pace. {sorry that I started the ball rolling and next please..... }
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#98
18-08-2006, 05:22 PM
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If according to your story, it did not come out in the top 3 prizes, it could only mean Kenny struck the Starters or Consolation prizes. If Starters, 6000 x $250 = 1.5 million (before Blackie's customary 5% commission) If Consolation, 6000 x $65 = 390k (before Blackie's customary 5% commission) Either ways the figure 500k seems very far off the mark. Quote:
I don't mean to be rude but it's really details like these that make or break movies (and stories) with its continuity or lack thereof. You just have to imagine one scene where a character wears a yellow shirt and then when the camera pans away and back, the colour of the shirt has changed to red. Just my two cents worth.
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#99
18-08-2006, 10:15 PM
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At the very first step out of his door.....suddenly his left eye twitched very badly. He thought what the fu*k is the matter but couldn't care less anymore as the money is already in his bag. All he could think of is to crutched his bag fully slinged and tightly under his arm and speed up his pace.
Kenny was very cautious on his way home...making sure that he wasn't tailed or eyed by anyone...acting as though nothing has happen...Even his wife and kids are not aware of his windfall....He quickly convert his winnings into travellers cheque, booked an air-ticket to Australia, preparing himself to make another big pile over there....He feels lucky...Since lady luck is smiling on him now, he should capitalise on every opportunity to make as much cash as possible, and what other ways to earn the fastest cash in the shortest time other than gambling.... Upon arriving in Australia, he checked into a posh hotel, stay in a suite and gambles in a VIP room meant for the high-rollers, the rich or the famous...He was treated like a king, with beautiful, busty blondes surrounding him, day in day out...Fuck and gamble occupies most of his time spent over there...That was the happiest moment of his life but it was short-lived....Within a couple of weeks, he winnings were exhausted....He was dead broke....He had lost everything....He wanted to continue to gamble but was forced to return back to shore...He had no one to turn to for help...."Fucking hell, I'll be back one day to win back 10 times my losses here...Na bei chee bye....Pui" were his last words to the croupier....With that, he departs for Singapore with a heavy heart...sunken feelings.... Last edited by Titleist; 18-08-2006 at 10:26 PM.
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#100
18-08-2006, 10:36 PM
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A few hundred grands lost in a couple of weeks, just like that...To him, it's really like easy money...easy come easy go...But he cannot stomach the feeling...It's too much of a losses to him...A few hundred grands...He felt the pain in his heart, he felt the pinch....He wanted to slap himself for not being able to stop on time or he would have incurred minimal losses...To a hardcore gambler like him, it is impossible to stop gambling till he has lost everything...He would always think that the next round would be his turning point, recouping his previous losses...If not, the next next round, or even the round after that...He would gamble on and on until his last chip has been staked....
No use crying over spilled milk now...To recoup his losses, he needs capital...And where in the world to raise such a substantial amount in the shortest time other than his old flame, Alicia....Yep, Alicia is rich...Especially when she has inherited the payout from Sam's insurance after his death...Till date, Kenny is not aware that Kelly has committed suicide...He intends to blackmail Alicia with Kelly's heritage again...To him, if it works in the past, it will work for him now...Anyway, this will be his last resort and he is confident that he will gets what he wants, just like before... With Alicia acting as his strong financial backer, he heaves a sign of relief....In fact, he started to recalls back his sexual escapde with those busty Aussies, mass orgies, bonking them raw and squirting inside them begins to make him shivers...tingling his sensual spines and senses...In one week time, he'll be back there and be treated like a king again... With that in mind, he dials Alicia's mobile no....
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#102
18-08-2006, 10:48 PM
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Many thanks to bro thomas88 for contributing his fair share of the story on my behalf...Really appreciate that...
These last few paragraphs are dedicated to all bros that like my story, especially bro onion-ring, my ardent and hardcore tiko reader kekeke....Hope that it'll not disappoint you...Sorry for the delay....Btw, I was zapped once but without any reason...Guess maybe my story was left dangling in the air and that bro left me a silent warning... that I must continue and complete my story or else i'll be wasting everybody time  ...Will try to complete the story in the shortest time possible and hoped everybody will enjoy reading it....Cheers
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#103
18-08-2006, 11:59 PM
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Well bro don't be sad ultimately its the cyber world take it easy
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#104
20-08-2006, 09:25 PM
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Please continue the story fast bro Titleist as the original author is still the best.
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#105
21-08-2006, 12:52 AM
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